Pyramid

What catches my ear in this piece is the rhythm and how well each instrument that you picked sounds with each of the different rhythms that comprises the piece as a whole.

At the end of the piece, at about 3:21, it sounds as if it catches and wasn't sure if that was a mistake or intended. Does make the end a bit interesting.

The song sounds good overall. After a while I miss a bit of variation. It's there, but since the background keeps up almost the same (even though using different voices), it gets a little lost in the flow.

Personally I don't overly like all-electronic sounds, but having worked with nothing but different keyboards myself I know the restraints that it brings.

I listened to the version of the song on the CD. The additional theme adds a lot of depth to it. It's like the two mains are now in a dialogue. That threee dimensional effect even manages to counter the 'artificial' feeling that pure electronic sounds always cause in me.