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All is not what it seems

< We're moving on : The Numbers Game >

Now, my friends,
you must understand
that all is not
what it seems.

Does that make sense to you?
I hope you understand,
in fact your life
depends on it.

As we move silently into the forest,
the whole world watches us
moving so swiftly
yet nobody sees,

and somehow,
it's easy to tell
that the people around you
won't help you one bit.

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Tags: poetry, moving on, all is not what it seems
Posted by Ben on August 02, 2007 17:42 / Edited: Never

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Posted by Sasha | October 05, 2007 22:27 | | Permalink

It's as if the forest represents some sort of trials/tribulations, and the last line suggests that the people around stood by and did nothing to help. Left you in that forest alone...

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